She Says Goodbye.
She held me tightly in her loving arms.
Strangely it felt surreal and very calm.
The sorrow was very clear in her eyes.
This was the day she would say goodbye.
The journey had finally come to an end.
No longer lovers possibly not even friends.
Her love for me overtime has slowly waned.
Where my love for her have daily gained.
I feel her heart beating fast against mine.
Feeling so close to her for the very last time.
Thou she is slowly tearing me apart inside.
All i want is for this to be a good, goodbye.
When she releases her arms, dreams are gone.
I will be here sitting hurting all on my own.
Those magic moments will have disappeared.
The world will be empty when she is not here.
This is the only woman I never hurt any way.
I should be angry; I should scream, rant and rave.
I should be pleading or begging her to stay.
I just want it to end in a caring and friendly way.
I want to remember us the way we used to be.
She looks me in the eye and slowly releases me.
I tell her I love her, and she softly smiles.
Both wiped tears from our eyes, she says goodbye.
Nataiella 2016.
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 1st, 2024 02:57
- Comment from author about the poem: In 2016 this was my follow up poem to the one i have listed called Hanging On By My Fingertips, speaks for itself
- Category: Love
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Comments6
Saying goodbye as often a very difficult thing to do. We form attachments that are not easily broken. This poem emphasizes such feelings. Very nicely written.
Thank you so much for your lovely comment Sorenbarrett
Okay, so I double backed and went to the previous poem and our conversation about it. Boy, this feels like there is a bit of a step back moment, still emotional but more in control (sorry for this unencompassing word, ironic to its meaning, in this context) but still exudes the evocative expression.
Thank you Arqios for your comment, very much appreciated
Well written and expressed
Thank you Tony
You're not
I am not ???? what
Sorry stupid phone, I ment you're welcome.
No worries
It’s so hard to let go and say behind and you have expressed that so well in this poem! Well done! 🌹👏
Thank you Tristan for your lovely comment
You are welcomr. 🙏
So very hard to let go. You have penned those emotions so well here. A heart felt write. Well done.
Thank you cassie for the lovely comment, much appreciated
I am a huge fan of rhyming poetry and yours was a pleasure to read. Loved the story it told and your rhyming did not feel forced but relaxed as your story unfolded. I am looking forward to reading more of your writtings....
Thank you Teardrop for your lovely comment, very much appreciated. this was a follow up To hanging On By My fingertips, which is also listed.
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