when sun illuminates a sapphire sky
and rays make dancing gems upon this stream
a breeze blows softly through the verdant leaves
and i am left to wander as i dream
my back rests arched against the bark of pine
my toes stretch closer to the water’s flow
and cooling crystal laps about my feet
my roller coaster life begins to slow
in harmony my heartbeat and my mind
i drift into a meditative state
i hear the sounds sweet nature as she calls
the world i know is absent it can wait
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Cassie58 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: (A little bit of reflective summer )
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A most peaceful state is formed by this poem. It flowes with the stream and wind. Beautiful images painted.
I very much appreciate your kind review Soren. Thank you so much.
Good write C.
Thank you Orchi for stopping by.
Soft and peaceful .. beautiful writing 🙂
Thank you Caring Dove. Pleased you enjoyed this poem. Take care.
Thank you for bringing summer to us, Cassie! I absolutely loved this poem and I could imagine myself doing exactly what you were describing. Indeed, the world is absent and it can wait! Well done! 🌹👏
Thank you Tristan for your encouraging review. It pleases me no end that you enjoyed this poem.
🤗 You’re welcome!
Breathtaking imagery I'm thinking you have many memories of your days abroad too, nothing like England on a sunny day either. Last time I flew into Heathrow I saw London on my left I'd never flown in blue skies true story. 🌹
Thank you dear Teddy. My poetry writing has been in the last ten years or so. My travelling was done prior to this time. Maybe I should pen one on China 🙂 Flying in to Heathrow and seeing the city of London is amazing. A wonderful experience. 🌹
My heartbeat slows, I drift, it all feels far away... almost there myself, Cassie.
Thanks Dave, relax and drift. Put your feet up. Pleased you stopped by.
I`m sure Tolkien would like this one!
I’ll take that as a compliment Mutley. Thank you so much for stopping by.
Most certainly a compliment!
Very Sara Teasdale.
Lovely Poem.
What a lovely thing to say Kevin. Thank you so much.
I imagine that as a reverse tree hug of sorts, having reclined against a low lying branch myself and splashing the streams flow below. Oh for those days. Even now some people would view that as lazing away our productive sunlight hours. But I dare go back! Thanks for bringing us there Cassie.
Nothing like chilling out on a sunny day. This is a place I go to compose poetry. Lovely it is. Thank you arqios.
You are most welcome Cassie 🙏🏻
Nature is so wonderful to be in harmony with Cassie.
Andy
Thank you so much Andy. All the best.
Wow this is special.I was transported to that spot.I made you a cup of peppermint tea and you told me your lies and I told you mine. Inspirational poem
Thank you David for your lovely review. I like peppermint tea. All the best.
A wonderful lullaby, soothing. Nice.
Thank you so much for stopping by Dan. Much appreciated.
i love it
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