Notice of absence from arqios
A reminder to extend an olive branchโฆ where possible.
Let us sup of the dignity of kindness and humilityโฆ
A reminder to extend an olive branchโฆ where possible.
Let us sup of the dignity of kindness and humilityโฆ
Through the politics of dancing,
In every step, bonds advancing.
From acquaintance to a lover’s dream,
In rhythm’s hold, we’re caught in between.
The mind, a skeptic, slow to sway,
Yet hearts in unison lead the way.
With every touch, and every glance,
We've to master this complex dance.
In moments fleeting, passion burns,
The heart, relentless, forever yearns.
A tango fierce, of mind and soul,
So two-gether, we become whole.
- Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: December 3rd, 2024 05:08
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A lovely piece of evocative writing, thank you Arqios
Thanks Tobani, so very kind ๐๐ป
You are very welcome
A great metaphor. Through my years of life, I have mastered several dances, but although Iโve tried the tango I have never mastered it. It is a wonderful dance of emotion and passion just like life itself. I guess Iโve never mastered life either and Iโm still working on it
While there is time, there is opportunity! Glad to be a witness (somehow) of your journey (a part of it).
I'm ashamed to say I'm more of a hand jive kinda guy but I know folk who live n breathe dance & I have a good deal of respect for them & their particular art form ..
To me it really doesnโt matter, a dance is a dance and more importantly who your dancing with more than to what! So hand jive babeh, that what you were born to do.
Love love love the word play: two-gether. Brilliant. Wonderful poem my friend! ๐โค๏ธ
Glad you enjoyed friend! Thank you ๐๐ป
An outstanding poem
and great use of metaphor!! ๐
The rhyme, "rhythm" and flow
a dance I so adore! ๐ต ๐ถ๐คฉ
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards โ๏ธ Thad
Thanks Thad ๐๐ปโ๐ผ๐๐ป
Wonderful words arqios. It is so true that dancing together makes you one.
Andy
Thanks Andy, for affirming what appears to be a human necessity... the dance.
A wonderful use of metaphor here. You caught the start of romance building up to the passion of the tango. Final line, completes the poem perfectly. Much enjoyed.
Thanks Cassie! No one can be a pair alone ๐คฃ๐๐ป
Tango thatโs an orange drink isnโt it? ๐
oh, there now.. it probably is! Yes! It comes in many flavours too. Now there's a twist for a spin off poem or so. Thanks again, Cassie
dance your way through life - enjoy the beautiful days
nice one
Thanks safina ๐๐ป
always welcome
A lovely interesting and engaging writing .. very nice to read
Thanks kindly ๐๐ป
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