tango of us

arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
Be kind….
…. words don’t rewind


Through the politics of dancing,
In every step, bonds advancing.
From acquaintance to a lover’s dream,
In rhythm’s hold, we’re caught in between.

The mind, a skeptic, slow to sway,
Yet hearts in unison lead the way.
With every touch, and every glance,
We've to master this complex dance.

In moments fleeting, passion burns,
The heart, relentless, forever yearns.
A tango fierce, of mind and soul,
So two-gether, we become whole.

 

 

 

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 3rd, 2024 05:08
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • TobaniNataiella

    A lovely piece of evocative writing, thank you Arqios

    • arqios

      Thanks Tobani, so very kind 🙏🏻

      • TobaniNataiella

        You are very welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        A great metaphor. Through my years of life, I have mastered several dances, but although I’ve tried the tango I have never mastered it. It is a wonderful dance of emotion and passion just like life itself. I guess I’ve never mastered life either and I’m still working on it

        • arqios

          While there is time, there is opportunity! Glad to be a witness (somehow) of your journey (a part of it).

        • Neville



          I'm ashamed to say I'm more of a hand jive kinda guy but I know folk who live n breathe dance & I have a good deal of respect for them & their particular art form ..

          • arqios

            To me it really doesn’t matter, a dance is a dance and more importantly who your dancing with more than to what! So hand jive babeh, that what you were born to do.

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Love love love the word play: two-gether. Brilliant. Wonderful poem my friend! 🙏❤️

            • arqios

              Glad you enjoyed friend! Thank you 🙏🏻

            • Thad Wilk

              An outstanding poem
              and great use of metaphor!! 👍
              The rhyme, "rhythm" and flow
              a dance I so adore! 🎵 🎶🤩
              Thanks for sharing my friend!!
              Best regards ✌️ Thad

              • arqios

                Thanks Thad 👍🏻✌🏼🙏🏻

              • Goldfinch60

                Wonderful words arqios. It is so true that dancing together makes you one.

                Andy

                • arqios

                  Thanks Andy, for affirming what appears to be a human necessity... the dance.

                • Cassie58

                  A wonderful use of metaphor here. You caught the start of romance building up to the passion of the tango. Final line, completes the poem perfectly. Much enjoyed.

                  • arqios

                    Thanks Cassie! No one can be a pair alone 🤣🙏🏻

                    • Cassie58

                      Tango that’s an orange drink isn’t it? 😀

                      • arqios

                        oh, there now.. it probably is! Yes! It comes in many flavours too. Now there's a twist for a spin off poem or so. Thanks again, Cassie

                      • NafisaSB

                        dance your way through life - enjoy the beautiful days
                        nice one

                        • arqios

                          Thanks safina 🙏🏻

                          • NafisaSB

                            always welcome

                          • Caring dove

                            A lovely interesting and engaging writing .. very nice to read

                            • arqios

                              Thanks kindly 🙏🏻



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