He says to her;
You are my only reason, still will be
when even ancient astrology is done.
When disintegration leaves no trace, not one;
you will even then ever be
when the battling in me stills to none.
Now desolate, solitary, weak from spiritual denial;
colliding with hypocrisy, tampering with the truth.
Unrealistic expectations colored by exaggeration,
dashed on the floor where reality lies fragmented;
misunderstanding misconstrued as enlightenment.
Still, he continues;
I will always treasure that brightening smile
you favored me with before the cataclysm transpired.
With the confusion and calamity that ensued,
even should artificial respiration postpones my demise,
my affection will accompany me to the other side.
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Author:
Dan Williams (
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That affection and love will never be lost Dan.
Andy
I will always treasure that
brightening smile
There is much love and affection in your words Dan. This reader felt those emotions coming through. Lovely poetry.
Love that goes beyond this life inscribed in this poem. The first part of this poem, indicate an emotion goes far deeper than reason and lasts much longer. I love the internal rhyming as well. Most lovely poem.
Nice DW, a poem that expresses the timeless and unwavering nature of love, even when faced with disillusionment and despair. The poem's vivid imagery and emotional depth highlight the complex interplay between reality and expectation, struggle and resilience. Much enjoyed!
A beautifully written poem, confirming when it is real love, it will last for eternity, Thank you Dan
Love it
To know true love is to appreciate every part of it, as you have done so elequently here. 🌹
Well written, Dan. Inspiring poem.
wow, such deep and unending love is hard to find these days - beautiful write
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