Who reads this rubbish?

orchidee

....My dafter poems, I mean!

It's enough to make you comment

As one poet did on a site, with several poems

'I don't care much for this write'

 

He/she used to do it regularly

Incurring poet's wrath

And rightly so

 

But me - I don't mind if ya say that

On my 'digression into daftness'- type poems

That's sounds like a good title to me

For a book on humorous poems

 

I insist ya agree with me

When I take KP down a peg or three

'Haven't you got anything better to do?' asks Fido

And he says:

'You should "get your coat"'

And 'get out more'

As the sayings go! 

 

Do ya know

Ya could waste an average of

Ohh, about 47 seconds or summat

Reading one of my dafter poems!

LOL

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 4th, 2024 03:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: Bit more daftness!
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 37
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  • Cassie58

    Well, they do say variety is the spice of life Orchi. I can honestly say your poems are unique, not like any others 🙂. However your hymns are very spiritual. Have a good Wednesday.

    • orchidee

      Thanks Cassie.

    • Neville


      daftness becomes you Steven .. and quite writely so

      • orchidee

        Thanks N. lol.

      • arqios

        A batch of new line botox should get you in the good books!

        • orchidee

          Thanks A. lol.

        • sorenbarrett

          Orchi it is only the craftiest that fain daftness. Underneath those words lies a great font of wisdom I’m sure. Your writings have become a staple on this site and even people like me who are non-religious enjoy your writings. I never thought I would say that about hymns or sermons but yours seem to mark the week with my daily need for Something beyond. Have a great day.

          • orchidee

            Thanks SB. I should get more Advent-minded myself then - or any spiritual theme.

          • Doggerel Dave

            I'd vote with Soren on this one; though I'm not sure how far 'beyond' I'd be expected to go.....

            • orchidee

              Thanks Dave. I went beyond in an NS way - too far beyond and fell in a black hole.

              • Doggerel Dave

                You will sing your way out in no time, orchi.

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Your daftness is your charm my friend! Never lose that! And your hymns are, well, truly divine imho. As for the critics, you could always sick Fido on them! 😂 🤣

                • orchidee

                  Thanks T. I only ask myself about the title! lol

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  BTW, “ digression into daftness” is a wonderfully alliterative title choice, just saying!

                  • orchidee

                    Erm, must I always be alliterative? Oops, done it again! lol.

                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                      LOL! There you go again! 🤣

                    • Tony36

                      Excellent write

                      • orchidee

                        Thanks T.

                        • Tony36

                          You're welcome

                        • Jerry Reynolds

                          A lot of fun, Orchi. Good read.

                          • orchidee

                            Thanks J.

                          • Thad Wilk

                            This poem is definitely
                            a bunch of daft-ness
                            I must say! 😳
                            But being daffy myself
                            I liked it in a way..👍🐹🐹
                            Best regards ✌️ Thad

                            • orchidee

                              Thanks T. lol.

                            • Goldfinch60

                              I don't no! There again I have wasted another 47 seconds of my life. LOL

                              Andy

                              • orchidee

                                Thanks Gold. lol.



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