Hidden Garden (reverse nonet)

arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
Be kind….
…. words don’t rewind

Calm.

Pure peace,

Hearts find ease,

Moonlit moments cease,

Dew-kissed dreams gently tease,

Mystic scents drift in the breeze,

Emerald leaves rustle and sway,

Whispers of secrets in petals lay,

Quietly blooms, where shadows softly play.

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 5th, 2024 05:54
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Teddy.15

    Beautiful, serenely peaceful in everyway. My kind of peaceful 🌹

    • arqios

      Thanks Teddy. Glad it worked out, nonets are usually the other way aroun, from 9 syllables down to one. 🙏🏻

    • TobaniNataiella

      A place to just chill, i enjoyed the read, Thank you

      • arqios

        Yes, chill, that’s the real deal!

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Ooh, I thorougly enjoyed the reverse nonet. What a wonderful feel the form gave the poem. A beautiful write, my friend! 🌹👏

        • arqios

          Thanks Tristan. Once the flow started, it just kept going. 🙏🏻

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            You are welcome! It flowed wonderfully!

          • sorenbarrett

            A most peaceful and relaxing passage. I was in that very spot this morning. Yes secrets lie in the leaves, indeed many of which we don’t understand. A very calming read.

            • arqios

              That’s probably what secret gardens are best at. Thanks Soren 🙏🏻

            • Neville



              Neville ..forms poetic these over fawning stop must really I ,like to not what's Hey,

              • arqios

                Me dear oh! Neville, thanks 🙏🏻

              • David Wakeling

                Cleverly constructed. It creates a wonderful image. Excellent

                • arqios

                  Thanks DW! 🙏🏻

                • Tony36

                  Beautiful

                  • arqios

                    Thanks Tony 🙏🏻

                    • Tony36

                      You're welcome

                    • Doggerel Dave

                      Can you register the form? In terms of the way a picture gets painted, a tale gets told this seems, in general a more satisfactory tool.

                      So peaceful that for me to break the silence......

                      • arqios

                        I thought that I posted the original nonet here but apparently not, it’s an exact reverse image much like those mirror reflections on bodies of water.

                        • Doggerel Dave

                          'Apparently not'... 'winter’s embrace' was my introduction to the nonet - straight line to this.

                          • arqios

                            Oh that would be it then, long time around to put them side by side. But there we have it!

                          • Thad Wilk

                            👍👍
                            A stunñing
                            reverse nonet!! 💯
                            Inviting and refreshing
                            Imagery and flows like
                            a gentle stream!!😍
                            My pleasure to read indeed!
                            Best regards ✌️ Thad

                            • arqios

                              Thanks Thad, always glad to hear how it went in the reading. 🙏🏻

                            • Goldfinch60

                              Beautiful words arqios.

                              Andy

                              • arqios

                                Thanks Andy 🙏🏻

                              • Cassie58

                                Pure serenity and brimful of uplifting imagery. Very nice aquios. A lovely read.

                              • Caring dove

                                Nice soft words .. I like your writing



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