Hidden in Sight
These words were not
hidden here ..
But rather left to be
found by those
curious enough to look
for their true
meaning and maybe,
to then find themselves ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Now aint that the truth 🤍
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- Users favorite of this poem: arqios, Accidental Poet
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Comments13
I hardly get the true meaning(s) of cryptic-type poems. Doh!
it must be a gift you don't have .. hoD .. 🐧👍
Food for thought, enjoyed the read
Cool, thank you Toban ..
You are very welcome
Wow! 🤯 Obviously and intentionally open to interpretation and the discovery of oneself in the process. True of any prosaic or poetic collection of words, really. But wow! Profound! Love this. 🌹👏
Profound thanks Tristan .. Neville
You’re welcome, Neville! 🙏
Absolutely beautiful!! A lovely short that has more impact on the reader that is open to it. Like a piece of gold lying in the street, overlooked by many it glimmers in the sun for those whose eye is open to it.
What a delightful gift you have bestowed upon me n my little scribble .. Thanks a million and with seasonal best wishes .. Neville .. 😎👍
I like this...alot. Short and yet, effective. Doesn't need to say more...the point is in the words you wrote.
how very kind dear teardrop & so very much appreciated too .. Neville
“Seek, and ye shall find” -there you go, I’m not a bible person, but it seemed logical to me…so what I got out of that was an observation of my own receptivity, which I cherish, and yes I am prepared to pick up, process, evaluate and perhaps incorporate….and so on….!
(Word count longer than your poem -so there!)
Yep' you got me beat .. cheers DD .. N 🙂
P 2:4
.............................................. steady Tiger .. those are not the best odds surely
Poetry rarely hides, I find they lightly veil or curiously disguise or gently nudge, even. Lovely little poem here. Liked and Faved!
you just made me smile .. and it's nearly time to knock off too .. wot could be better .. cheers arqios
Excellent write Nevilie
Ta Tony36 .. just a quickie while we are both here .. when will you become Tony37 .. I'm asking for a friend you understand .. Neville
Nevilie by now it should read Tony 44, but I doubt I change it
This is, I think, the heart and essence of poetry. I think it is why more people don't get involved with places like this. Nicely done.
I think you may have something there in what you left behind .. and I thank you for my portion of it .. Neville
So true Neville, we all need to find those words.
Andy
There aint no flies on you sir Finch .. cheers
I love words.. Sometimes they can paint the sky, or drip down like rain. Left for interpretation. Great little poem.⭐⭐⭐
You got me Babe .. thank you .. 🕊️😎👍
Many things are found by those who know not what they're looking for. 😉🌹
its the knowing takes time to get one's head around .. but I got'cha back n that's wot matters most innit .. 😎🌹👍
😉👍🌹
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