Aging moth holes in a black canopy
beam light from far beyond
A cloud, veil of vanity
moon reflects on mirror's pond
Songs of primitive memory
played on cricket's legs
The tune of a loon in night's ebony
emerge from phoenix eggs
Star's drizzled beams
leak wisdom from above
in drips that form pools of dreams
bleeding streams of distant love
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Online) - Published: December 7th, 2024 03:54
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Good write SB.
Thank you so much Orchi I do appreciate your reading this poem and taking the time to comment.
I enjoyed the read
I thank you for your reading this poem and I am glad that you enjoyed it
You are very welcome
Its amazing what one might find in darkness .. one only need look long and hard enough .. absolutely dazzling poetry sorenbarrett 👍
I thank you again Neville. Your words are always encouraging, so I’ll go about writing another piece.
Very enjoyable read, loved loved loved the 2nd stanza Songs of primitive memory
played on cricket's legs...breath taking!
Thank you so much Tear drop your words are very encouraging and they are deeply appreciated. Thank you so much for your read.
Simply wow! 'in drips that form pools of dreams' - my dream line. Loved the poem!
I thank you so much Rebellion. Your support in my attempts to write our valuable and I thank you for them.
In the darkness, much is revealed. It just takes adjustment of sight and a smidge of light. Wonderful poem, my friend! 👏
Thank you so much, Tristan. Yes, I love the dog and it’s quiet and secrets. I appreciate very much your kind words and thank you for your review and comments.
Some fabulous imagery here of darkness. That final stanza, starting with stars drizzled beams is so creative in its artistry. The sounds came through as well. A lovely piece Soren.
I thank you very much Cassie for your kind words. They mean a great deal and serve a great support for further writing.
Liked and Faved 👍🏻👍🏻 Such a lyrical delight, not to mention its oozing of beauty and love,
Thanks so much Cryptic for the most generous comment
A fabulous poem
my friend!! 💯
Nothing escapes your
dazzling poetic vision!
Songs of primitive memory
played on cricket's legs🦗
love it!! 😻
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
Thanks so much Thad for the read and most kind words they are always cherished.
"Songs of primitive memory" indeed; you have outdone yourself again. I'm a little slow, having just figured out I can name favorites.
Thank you so much Dan your words have brightened my day and are most appreciated.
Those holes in the dark can bring so much wonder to our lives soren.
Andy
Indeed they do Andy. Thank you so much for your read and most brightening comment
A magnificent vision of outer space and eternity is what I see, bleeding streams of distant love (wow) wonderful dearest sorrenbarret 🌹
Thank you so much my friend for your continual support and kind remarks they brighten the day
This is my favorite of your poems so far. Its beautifully exquisite. The words mingle like a wine tasting party. Soft on your tongue, nice on the eyes, and harmony to the ears. I really liked this write.
Thank you so much for the read and most poetic comment, These ideas happen from time to time and if I'm lucky enough to be somewhere to write them down before they evaporate then one is born. I am very pleased that you liked it.
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