life's no faerie tale

arqios


Notice of absence from arqios
Be kind….
…. words don’t rewind

From doubt to triumph, she ascends,  
She walks a path where dreams transcend.  
Against the odds, she builds her day,  
In every step, she carves away.

Though voices told her she would fail,  
Yet in her heart, she sets each sail.  
With each new change, a life reborn,  
A faerie tale, through night to morn.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • TobaniNataiella

    Very tender and sweet poem, a lovely read on a wet and cold Sunday, Thank you

    • arqios

      Most welcome, glad to bring some cheer to such a day.

      • TobaniNataiella

        You are very welcome

      • Caring dove

        Change even tho things may feel difficult .

        This is lovely . ))

        It can be hard to change things when we are struggling .. sometimes

        There’s a soft feel to this poem
        Very nicely expressed

        • arqios

          Soft change transitions and perpetuates better than rough and sudden changes. Well, at least that is the notion I get. thanks kindly.

        • Lorenz

          Very nicely expressed ! good job chat gpt !

        • sorenbarrett

          I love the archaic language Used in this poem. It adds a sense of age and with it credibility. The Rhymin of this poem was wonderful and add so much to the meaning itself. It has a very classical field to it.

          • arqios

            Thanks Soren. 🙏🏻 It does have a certain sound and tone.

          • David Wakeling

            this is so amazing.I love the cadence and rhyme. I,m not sure who she is but it can stand for all of us.Its all a fairy tale.

            • arqios

              Indeed DW, she could be all of us individually, and together even as a whole. Thanks 🙏🏻 kindly.

            • Tony36

              Beautiful

              • arqios

                Thanks Tony 🙏🏻

                • Tony36

                  You're welcome

                • Cassie58

                  Shades of Byron. Beautiful poetry. Reads so very nicely.

                  • arqios

                    Thanks Cassie. 🙏🏻 Will have to revisit Byron and make light of his shadows 👍🏻

                  • Thomas W Case

                    Tremendous work.

                    • arqios

                      Thanks TWC 🙏🏻

                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                      Wonderful poem, my friend! A true delight to read. ❤️🙏

                    • Neville



                      this is simply magical ..

                      • arqios

                        Cheers N, thanks 🙏🏻

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Wonderful positive words arqios.

                        Andy

                        • arqios

                          Thanks Andy makes the daily drama all worth it. 🙏🏻

                        • Tom Dylan

                          Nicely done. A fine write.

                          • arqios

                            Thanks Tom 🙏🏻

                          • Kevin Hulme

                            Like It .

                            • arqios

                              Cheers Kevin 🙏🏻

                            • NafisaSB

                              nice and positive message - beautiful

                              • arqios

                                Thank you safina 🙏🏻

                                • NafisaSB

                                  welcome, my friend

                                • Melancholic~Onion

                                  “She walks the path where dreams ascend” That’s my favorite part.

                                  • arqios

                                    Thanks kindly, that line makes the reader sigh… I must agree with you. 🙏🏻



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