Living in Epicaricacy

Demar Desu

It seems as if I 

self sabotage myself too 

I still don’t know why 

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  • arqios

    Powerful in its brevity!

    • Demar Desu

      Thank you, being vulnerable feels like true power

      • arqios

        Yes! That is so true 👍🏻

      • Bobby O

        Maybe it’s just to let the world catch up?

        • Demar Desu

          As George strait once said “maybe the world is three drinks behind” 😅

          • Bobby O

            Out of the bevy of replies available to answer my comment , I salute you because I freaking think it would be impossible to improve on your response. I really like when somebody “nails” it , or hits it out of the park like you did. Major Props my friend.

          • Tony36

            Powerful

            • Demar Desu

              Thanks T

              • Tony36

                You're welcome

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                I am not favoriting this because I like the feeling...but because you have expressed a feeling I have known my whole life. Jim Morrison once said, "I see myself as an intelligent, sensitive human with the soul of a clown which forces me to blow it at the most important moments." Truthfully, I concur with that about myself. Anyway, well done my friend! 🌹👏 You are the king of concise!

                • Demar Desu

                  TRL, thank you bro. I really like that quote, I’m continuously working on myself but damn it’s hard it’s like asking a surgeon to perform surgery on themselves. Still the goal is always to improve and heal. Thank you brother

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    You are welcome my friend! 🙏❤️

                  • rin

                    Once you understand that, you will become an enlightened Demar Desu.

                    • Demar Desu

                      Thank you Rin, the more I know the more I love to live

                    • vicecream

                      Learned a new word today

                      • Demar Desu

                        I’m trying to be your top 3 teachers

                        • vicecream

                          U already are 🙂



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