3:00 AM
A quiet embrace in a world of chaos
Now a world of violet blue
This silence is all that is true
And a mind is awoken anew
The fabric is softly at peace
Listless
A gentle bond reluctant
To release
Drifting thoughts
To trickle off and then cease
Into velvety darkness
- Author: Eugene S. (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: December 10th, 2024 03:30
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 28
Comments4
A tranquil exploration that is poignant and thought-provoking. It reminds us to cherish the quiet, introspective moments that allow us to find peace amid the chaos of life. Reminds me of several poems I’ve penned on the same theme, one calling the phenomenon as “Cinderella dreaming.” Much enjoyed. 🙏🏻
Thank you so much. I have to say that it portrays exactly what was happening. 😁
You are most welcome 🙏🏻
I like this piece but as of yet I still haven’t untangled the fabric
Not much fabric to untangle - a rather simplistic portrayal of a brief moment. Thanks for reading!
Excellent
Thank you again!
You're welcome
Sometimes we do not value peace in the way we should, i enjoyed the read, thank you
I'm glad I was able to convey the sentiment. Thanks for reading.
You are very welcome
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