I lay in bed listening,
Listening to the rain
Falling from the heavens,
Cleansing our world,
Washing away our hurt and sorrow
And lining the Earth in a new coat of love,
Where pain and suffering
Are prevented from bursting its protection.
Or is it falling in shivering sorrow,
Weeping for a world gone mad,
Crying for the shame and hate,
Flowing through the world.
A place of terror
A place where love has failed,
Trying to wash away the blood
That man is pouring on this Earth.
One day the rain will fall for peace,
And our world will once more
Be a place where we will all
Make love, Not war!
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: December 11th, 2024 02:07
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 25
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Qurrathul Ain
Comments9
I so hope you are write Goldfinch60 .. & no kidding .. Neville
So do I Neville, so do I.
Andy
I give you all my respect for this hope you hold within your heart dear Andy, I too would love to see nothing less. 🌹
Much appreciated Teddy, thank you for your kind words.
Andy
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
I don`t usually like rain but if it can be peace to us all, let it rain, very enjoyable read, Thank you
Thank you Tobani, whatever can bring is peace is the way to go.
Andy
You are very welcome
A most positive thought that assuredly is true but unfortunately not in the near future. Very nicely written Andy
Thank you soren, unfortunately what you have said is so true.
Andy
Amen to that Andy. A fine piece of reflective poetry. Your posted music, took me by surprise. Usually classical or jazz, but this was really rocking. Have a great Wednesday.
Thank you Cassie. I do like rocking music as well from the seventies and before, it died in the eighties as far as I am concerned.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Thank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome Andy
Lets hope so. Great song and band.
I sure do Thomas. Thank you.
Andy
Here, here!
Thank you arqios.
Andy
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