Suicide is a good option
You said
Now I'm laying in a hospital bed
Scared the shit out my mother
She walked in thinking I'm dead
I should've been.
I'm worthless
Useless
Don't know why I lived
Wish I took a pic
Of my beautiful red wrist.
If I died how would you feel?
Proud or consumed by guilt.
I tried ending my life because of your comment
I'm not Sharing this for pitty
Could give two fucks about your sorry
Who hurt you
It wasn't me
What did I possibly do to make you so angry
On December 9th you helped my demons defeat me
Congratulations Lorenz.
I hope you fly high on self esteem
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Author:
nehemiah adams (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Yesterday, I got s comment on my poetry saying\r\n\\\"Suicide is a good option !\\\" Soo i tool the advice. \r\nI felt really down when I wrote that poem, and his comment messed me up Soo badly, now on December 11th I\\\'m barely being discharged. You never know what\\\'s going on in others life\\\'s, and that was the least I expected from this platform.
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Comments7
Wow! It’s good writing but very targeted and was dripping
Thank you, good to here from you
You convey your feeling very well here. A new day has begun. You are a beautiful person and I have been enjoying reading you. Put all your energy into your writing, it is good therapy. Ignore the hurt .
Thank you
I just read and translate the profound message of souls .
Do you have no sense of self-preservation in you and are so easily led astray? Life is beautiful, appreciate it and cherish it.
Uhhh thanks 🤨
Am sorry this has happened to you, hope your on the mend
Im good
Great write
Thank you
You're welcome
Whatever their name, they are ignorant and certainly not a philosopher, with their tone-deaf messaging! Vivid walk away and report if you must-also preserve your emotions please when it gets too upsetting on social media-There is no room for inappropriateness or abuse here! Glad that your poetry keeps shinning …
Thank you! Your words are always wise even when your not writing poetry
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