wind woman

rengoku


Notice of absence from rengoku
if I’m off I’m probably busy studying for law
orrr killing demons

she whistles about the moor

she heartlessly bangs on the door

she rattles the windows

rustles through the trees

crys in the deserts

an unknown plea

she screams on the ocean

she walks in the moonlight

creating a breeze 

 

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  • Cheeky Missy

    Whoa. This is richly deep. Gorgeous with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy, it's so beautifully rendered. I love it. Thank you for sharing.

    • rengoku

      awwww thanks so much!!!!!

    • TobaniNataiella

      Beautifully written, paints those pictures in your head, Thank you

    • Tony36

      Bravo, beautiful write

      • rengoku

        thank you!

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Cassie58

          Rich in imagery and I heard that rattling and whistling. Nicely composed poem.

          • rengoku

            thank you!

          • Lorenz

            Your words my worlds !

            • rengoku

              haha thank you

              • Lorenz

                Read my poem ''The sea of trees '' Among my first ones .(about the Aokihagara forest ).

                • rengoku

                  its very beautiful

                • sorenbarrett

                  This is a wonderful poem with such great lines of analogy, each line a new analogy. I picture an old woman in the wind. So nicely done this is a work of art

                • Kenzie

                  AAAAAMAAZINGG

                  • rengoku

                    t-thank you...

                    • Kenzie

                      Y-Y-YO-YOUR W-Welcome

                      • rengoku

                        LMFAO

                        • Kenzie

                          HEHEHHEHEHEH

                          • rengoku

                            s-s-scaryyyy

                            • Kenzie

                              Oh...... *cries*

                              • rengoku

                                sorry

                                • Kenzie

                                  NP 😀

                                • Parisab

                                  Beautiful tone and energy…

                                  • rengoku

                                    thank you

                                  • NafisaSB

                                    beautiful imagery - well done my dear

                                    • rengoku

                                      thanks

                                      • NafisaSB

                                        you are most welcome



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