Winter

rengoku


Notice of absence from rengoku
if I’m off I’m probably busy studying for law
orrr killing demons

music playing 

 

trees swaying

 

snow falling

 

smiles everywhere

 

beauty in the air

 

lights on the tree twinkle

 

shimmering tinsel

 

flickering candles

 

stockings hung

 

carols sung

 

Jesus's birth

 

thats christmas

  • Author: Gyiuu does cry (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2024 00:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: Christmas in 12 days!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  • Category: Special occasion
  • Views: 25
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, rengoku, Kenzie
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Comments7

  • rin

    Even Jesus Christ would never have thought that even after 2000 years, his birthday would still be celebrated.
    When I write it like this, it sounds like a celebration of a character I'm guessing, but it's actually a day of prayer.

  • sorenbarrett

    Lovely short lines define this poem punctuating its meaning like the ringing of a bell.

    • rengoku

      thanks,soren

    • TobaniNataiella

      All summed up in a very short words, lovely read.

    • Tony36

      Great write

      • rengoku

        thanks

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Cassie58

          Delightful, the countdown to Christmas Day. You set the scene. Nice.

          • rengoku

            thank you so much

          • Kenzie

            awesome

            • rengoku

              thank you lol

              • Kenzie

                You welcome lol

              • 𓆩Mase𓆪

                I like it.

                • rengoku

                  thanks



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