Winter

sheta


Notice of absence from sheta
if im not on,im looking for an adventure

music playing 

 

trees swaying

 

snow falling

 

smiles everywhere

 

beauty in the air

 

lights on the tree twinkle

 

shimmering tinsel

 

flickering candles

 

stockings hung

 

carols sung

 

Jesus's birth

 

thats christmas

  • Author: The Adventurer (Pseudonym) (Online Online)
  • Published: December 13th, 2024 00:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: Christmas in 12 days!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  • Category: Special occasion
  • Views: 30
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, sheta, ᛕꫀƺꫀ᥊᥊ꫀ
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  • rin

    Even Jesus Christ would never have thought that even after 2000 years, his birthday would still be celebrated.
    When I write it like this, it sounds like a celebration of a character I'm guessing, but it's actually a day of prayer.

    • MR.apocalypse

      We live and let Live

      • sheta

        yes

      • sorenbarrett

        Lovely short lines define this poem punctuating its meaning like the ringing of a bell.

        • sheta

          thanks,soren

        • Poetic Licence

          All summed up in a very short words, lovely read.

          • sheta

            thanks

            • Poetic Licence

              You are very welcome

            • Tony36

              Great write

              • sheta

                thanks

                • Tony36

                  You're welcome

                • Cassie58

                  Delightful, the countdown to Christmas Day. You set the scene. Nice.

                  • sheta

                    thank you so much

                  • ᛕꫀƺꫀ᥊᥊ꫀ

                    awesome

                  • 𓆩Mase𓆪

                    I like it.

                    • sheta

                      thanks



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