Let us rise with the dawn,
Embrace this new day’s promise.
Tomorrow’s whispers guide us;
Innocence of past years fuels our steps
Together find peace in Present’s embrace.
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crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 24th, 2026 05:06
- Category: Nature
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A lovely write to begin a new day and carry us on in the present of the moment. A fave my friend
Should be the poem of the week to guide us through the turmoil we call life now.
I will take the words to the football today and hope for the best.
A morning prayer I would really like to believe....
Arqios, innocence of past years...I guess when I was a kid. However, when I grew up? An intriguing line (well, to me anyways!)
Btw, that picture. It`s something else!
A lovely write
I love the line, “Tomorrow’s whispers guide us". It's really stayed with me. It suggests guidance without force…possibility without pressure. Paired with the closing embrace of the present, it gives the poem a soft but purposeful arc. Beautifully handled, my dear friend.. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Good write A.
I am up at six every morning Rik and see the dawns light many days, such a wonderful start to the day.
Andy
i like the positivity and calm this poem conveys...well done...
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