I gave you my heart
But
Instead you dropped it
And watched it shattered into a million pieces
While you stood there laughing
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Author:
Tony36 (
Online) - Published: December 16th, 2024 07:38
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Comments8
Powerful image and expression. Power dynamics in intimate relationships can be very nasty and cruel to boot.
Thank you
You are most welcome 🙏🏻
A sad poem of betrayal that pulls at the heart Tony
Thank you
I am liking this not because I like the experience you describe but because, my dear Tony, I have had this happen to me...more than once...sometime more than once by the same people. I like and fave this because you have done so well, in brevity, expressing this. Bravo! 🌹👏
Thank you Tristan
As anyone who has been through this Male or Female, very difficult to cope with, A Powerful few words in the poem
Thank you
A real sense of sadness in your expression Tony. Your final line conveys cruelty. No one wants to be laughed at. Well penned.
Thank you
...................... Ouch 💔
Thank you Nevilie
A very poignant 😢
and touching write!! ✍️
Great brevity,
really pulls on the heartstrings!🥺
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
Thank you Thad, best regards
It's giving the song "Last Christmas" but instead of giving the heart away she personally makes sure that it breaks beyond repair.
Thank you
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