i
once i was alone
in an ocean
of tears-
stranded,
drowning in this
ever rising tide
of despair
somehow i found you-
ii
hope, whispered to me
and the ebullient tide
of your being
gently caressed
the sandy shores
of my heart,
with the edging
waves of your charms-
iii
once i was alone
and lost,
then i found you-
your love saved me
from this ever raging
undertow of
loneliness,
before it had engulfed
my soul~
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Author:
Thad Wilk (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 16th, 2024 10:26
- Category: Love
- Views: 22
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Comments10
That’s lovely ) nicely expressed words
Hii poetess!! 🌺
Thank you for
stopping by my way! 😊
Nice hearing from you
y'all have a nice day!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad
Good write. Good day to ya, Thad! 🙂
Hii ya Orchidee!! 👋
Thank you my friend
for your inspiring words!! 😁
Y'all have a great day!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
A poem of rejoicing and jubilation at finding love. Beautiful and uplifting
Hii ya Soren!! 🍶 👋
Thank you my friend
for your uplifting comment!! 😁
Y'all have a wonderful day!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
Beautiful poetry Thad. A most enjoyable read . Thank you. Have a great day.
Hii ya Cassie!! 🌺 🐦
Thank you poetess for
your visit, I'm happy you enjoyed!! 😊
So nice hearing from you!
You have a wonderful day!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹. Thad
Well written and expressed
Hi ya Tony! 👋 🤠
Thanks for s stopping by guy!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
You're welcome Thad, best regards
You're welcome Thad, best regards
While I'm not much into love poetry, I'm prepared to grudgingly concede that yours is a cut above, Thad.👍
Howdy Dave!! 👋 🐶 🐕
Thank you my friend!
I know you hate love poems,
and it musta killed you to admit
it was a "cut above" ! 🤣
Have a wonderful day!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
I don't hate love poems, it is just that too many confuse love with infatuation.
No trouble at all to give credit where credit's due.
Beautiful.
Howdy Thomas!! 👋 🤠
Thank you my friend!
Happy you enjoyed!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
A lovely poem declaring there heart has been captured by love, lovely read
Hii ya Tobani!! 👋 🍵
Thank you for visiting!! 😊
Happy you enjoyed!! 👍
Y'all have a great day!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
You are very welcome
Love is so very strong and wonderful Thad.
Andy
That’s a kind of “tickle” that those in the know, know and revel in!
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