Offer ends soon they say
Normally four hundred, yours only nine hundred if you hurry
Buy what you don't need and can't afford to pay
Ten times more in interest, but don't worry
Box big, less inside
Price inflated
Quality a mess, return denied
Value negated
Too old to work anymore
They cut my social security you know
Each day growing more poor
They say this helps the economy grow
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Online)
- Published: December 19th, 2024 03:44
- Comment from author about the poem: A poem of deliberate poor quality to match the requirements of quality control that demands products self destruct after the warranty expires so more can be sold
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 68
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Tristan Robert Lange, rebellion_in_sanity, domilla
Comments10
I'm not a fan of today's world, how very poetically said dear sorrenbarret πΉ
Thanks so much Teddy as always your words are most appreciated
They got it the wrong way around and gradually theyβre bringing us back to the Middle Ages.
Thanks Cryptic yes feudalism where only the government owns land, you work for left overs, nobiity gives the orders. Capitalism and greed go together like bread and butter and humans love to spread it and eat it.
I feel that brother!
There are Metallica lyrics forming in my head. "You know it's sad but true". And that is because everything said here...is just that: sad but true.
I love how you intentionally had the form (or quality) of the poem match the crappiness of today's political bullshit. Brilliant my friend, and I am sure you agree with me on this...but I get really sick of what "they" say. Who are "they" anyway? And yet they make self-serving decisions that affect the rest of us. Anywho...enough of "them"...your poem, friend, is so very wonderfully done! πΉπ
Thank you Tristan I do appreciate the read and comment. I find it amusing how we have come to accept poor quality and high prices as a standard. Despite a deliberate effort to make this poem of poor quality on another site people kept telling me about its good quality. I know that people are just rying to be nice but where does that end and honesty begin?
π€£I hear you there. Yes, people are trying to be nice...that and, well, art really is in the eyes of the beholder...so even poor quality can generate highly emotional responses. But yes, I π― hear you there...and your poem really does drive that point home, my friend!
Great write
Thanks Tony your reads and comments are always most appreciated
You're welcome
Taking the bull by the horn - I don't know any better illustration of the phrase than the poem.
Thanks so much Rebellion I appreciate very much your reads and comments.
I never signed up for this .. and that's a fact, but they don't care, do they .. not hardly a single one of em .. ππ§
Thanks Neville another gripe rid from my innards. Appreciate the kind words
False modesty, Soren. Clear picture there (and also truthful).
Pop out as much poor quality poetry as you like - I'll understand that.
Seriously Dave this one was rated only a three out of ten on the poetry scale on another site and I felt it was disposable as the poem argues. Thanks for the support though my friend.
So true. Sad. Well said.
Thanks John your review is as always valued.
That is what it is like nowadays soren, back in my days we fixed things and did not just buy new things.
Andy
Yea seems like I remember those days. Thanks for the read Andy its appreciated
Itβs all about making money and cutting corners. The worse part of capitalism. I dislike intensely the way the world is moving. We need a more compassionate and a less throw away world Soren. You hit your point across well.
Thank you Cassie for the review and most kind words of support they are always appreciated
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