I awake into the darkened morning,
The sun not yet shining on me,
But this is the day it starts,
The days starts to get longer,
Get longer each morning I wake
This light will show me the way
As each day shows its glory to me,
The light of my life will glow brightly
Showing me the way to go forward,
Forward in my wonderful life.
The brightest light will be there,
Be there all the time.
My loved one will be next to me
Her light shining over me forever,
And that light will take us to eternity.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Our love will get brighter each day.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 27
- Users favorite of this poem: Bella Shepard
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Comments9
................................................... How lovely 💛👍
Thank you Neville.
Andy
The light of Love and the light of day.Wonderful poem
Most kind David, thank you.
Andy
It must be a pleasure for your loved one to read these dedications you write for them, A lovely enjoyable read to start the day, Thank you
Yes she does enjoy them Tobani, thank you.
Andy
You are very welcome
My day started very darkly. The first thing I saw on TV was KP in a quiz show. That's ruined my day now! lol.
Such a shame Orchi, their is another day tomorrow.
Andy
Heehee anything to do with KP ruins my day! lol.
Wonderful metaphor and a good write Gold
Thank you soren.
Andy
Excellent choice Andy. Even before laying eyes on the first line, my initial thought was that of a dawning moment. As I child I used to dream and float off on this composition. It accompanies your poem well. The lengthening of the sun beams and its solidifying in intensity cuts through any greyness and mutedness. Thanks for this one, Sunday best for me!
Most kind arqios and I am very appreciative of your comments.
Andy
👏👏 Bravo!
A beautiful poem
I must say!!
Really touching
and emotional
made my day!! 🤩
Thanks for sharing my friend,!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad, my absolute pleasure.
Andy
The symbol of light is so appropriate to describe the love you feel, it shines on every aspect of your life, what could be more beautiful. Another exquisite choice of music as well.
Thank you Bella, light has always been in my life.
Andy
Two souls that were forever destined to be one. Life sure has it's map full of twists and turns dear Andy, nothing makes me feel happier than to know you have someone special. 🌹
So kind Teddy, thank you very much.
Andy
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