motion obsessed

arqios

 

Limpets and lemmings,
champions of inertia,
heralds of the status quo.
In their unwavering passivity,
they reveal the absurdity
of our frenetic world.

Limpets, unmoving,
a satire of steadfast conservatism,
clinging to tradition,
to their familiar rocks.

Lemmings, wandering,
a sardonic parody
of aimless ambition,
drifting through life's liminal spaces.

In their silent revolution,
they invite us to question,
to reflect on our own pursuits,
our own values,
in a world obsessed with motion.

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 19th, 2026 05:22
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    I love the last line "In a world obsessed with motion" that pretty well sums up modern society. And the lemmings well that pretty well sums up humans as well. A nice piece of work my friend most poetically said

    • arqios

      That’s good to hear as this final version has been ready for over a year now. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

    • Doggerel Dave

      I had images virtually uninvited in my head of both limpets and lemmings I have known and do know. So, of myself? hmm.. well...

      • arqios

        It’s now an epidemic proportioned overpopulation, perhaps πŸ€”πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ cheers dear friend πŸ‘πŸ»

        • Doggerel Dave

          Your mix of insights and occasions can be very challenging (in a good way) at times.

        • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

          a fine write my friend



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