To the child: sweet things come their way;
Joy fills their eyes;
Hearts melt away...
To know you is to love you;
Darkness can never cover that.
Baby face: sometimes a little flat..
What can I do? my turtle dove...
I search for answers, but only find love.
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: An attempt at redemption on the eve of our 27th? wedding anniversary.
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Sugary sweet this poem is most romantic and would appeal to the heart lovely
I live in hope!
Ooh a redemption afoot! And 27 years at stake, in 3 months time I too will have arrived at 27 years with wifey although our original set date was 3 months ago. But back to youse, Ben anniversaire!
It's actually our 28th! Opps, and to think, maths was my best subject.
That’s what the backspace is for, like a whiteout film or liquid eraser!
"There is nothing covered that shall not be revealed."
Lol, that’s true.
Love it
Good write 2.
👏👏 clapping!
A wonderfully romantic 💓
poem and attempt at
redemption indeed!! 👍
I think 🤔 she'll buy it!
My pleasure to read!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
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