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In the morning light
we gather at the square
voices mingling
plans unfolding
.γ.γ.γ a tapestry of lives
undulating in confettied sun
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: β¦letβs make it a short one today. Over the years I have discovered the night owl in me. But I do remember having good early mornings under the watchful eye of the Bundy clock. Perhaps this micropoem shall travel the distance in a short span of timeβ¦ maybe even like a Concorde jet, minus the environmental issues. Relax, itβs just a (ill-chosen) metaphorβ¦ π
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In preparation for the day ahead, enjoyed the read
Oh thatβs nice timing. Thanks kindly
You are very welcome
A beautiful image cast in a moment and then gone with just an echo in the mind remaining
Sure is, Soren. Thanks so much ππ»
When a new year arrives, it feels like a new time has arrived. It's an illusion, but it's a good opportunity to change your feelings.
That must be be the primary function of illusions, of which fiction is a category. Thanks kindly, rin ππ»πππ»
Great write
Rings true to me. The celebration is over...on with life. On with the hustle, the bustle, the mingling, and the working...the planning and the unfolding of plans... billions of people around the world, carrying on with what they hope to be abundant life. Loved the poem, my friend! πΉπ
Like when the stock market reopens. As a child my logic was why close the stock market at allβ¦ economy doesnβt stopβ¦ are they unduly economising ? A bit Scroogian there, there seems to be a little Ebanezer in every one, he isnβt the exception to the rule! Sorry, I digressβ¦. Thank you so much fur unfurling the sails of the this short poem.
You are welcome, my friend! Let her set sail, indeed! A wonderful write!
Stowaways welcome! β΅οΈ
I'm already onboard...neatly stowed away! π€£
And off we go into the blue yonder! Let 2025 open up!
Woohoo..."I am king of the..." ehem...wrong voyage. Knock on wood! wood πͺ΅ Let's try that again...Woohooo! Wooohooo, Sailing the "open" blue!
Rock? πͺ¨ There should be a girl worth fighting forβ¦ rock? πͺ¨
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Short and sweet. Well written mi amigo
Gracias ππ»
ππ Clapping!
Short and sweet
and so complete!! β
Great early morning π
eye guy!! ποΈ
Love it!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
Thanks Thad ππ»ππ»π
Beautiful imagery. Love confetti sun.
Thanks Thomas; I did like that image as well, so on the poem it stayed πππ»π
Gathering with friends is ao wonderful arqios.
Andy
Yes it is! Andy, and here at MPS we also gather together ππ»
A nice write. You really captured something there.
Thanks Tom! ππ»
Love this one
Thanks ever so kindly ππ»
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