Into The Great New Year.

Goldfinch60



On this New Years morning

I step into the shower,

The water flows over me

Washing all the old year from me,

Taking aways any worries in my life

Leaving everything that is good

To take into the new year.

My life has far more good than bad,

I have the beauty of Nature around me,

The glory of music within me,

And my beautiful lover beside me.

My life is so good

So I know this New Year will be

Will be so wonderful,

As I know this particular day,

This day is already good,

As I got up this morning.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 3rd, 2025 02:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: My New Year has started well as we are down on the Isle of Wight for a few days our place of absolute relaxation in the hotel where everything is done for us.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 35
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Bella Shepard
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  • mvvenkataraman

    A different way of conveying the arrival of New Year,
    Just by bathing, the Old Year is given a farewell,
    And the New Year has been called to take over,
    A novel way of thinking to create a fine poem!

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you for your kind remarks mvvenkataraman, much appreciated.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Good write Gold.

    • sorenbarrett

      A wonderful positive attitude that certainly will lengthen life and give it more meaning and joy. Washing away the old. Lovely as the music in this piece.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you soren, the new year will being joy to us all as we have made it into this year.

        Andy

      • Teddy.15

        Absolutely, let's cherish what we have and be grateful to see the beauty that surrounds us. 🌹

        • Goldfinch60

          So true Teddy, thank you.

          Andy

        • Accidental Poet

          Well that's a positive start to a new year. Give it everything you got Andy. 😉👍

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you AP, I certainly will give it all.

            Andy

          • arqios

            So glad for this exemplar of a point of view that orders life in such a positive manner. Something we can all aspire to!

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you arqios, very much appreciated.

              Andy

              • arqios

                Much welcome Andy🙏🏻

              • 2781

                "A man hath joy by the answer of his mouth: and a word spoken in due season, how good is it!"

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you 2781, much appreciated.

                  Andy

                • Bella Shepard

                  Another beautiful piece of music to accentuate the wonderful sentiment of your poem. Thank you for sharing these lovely thoughts, for I know that you will always make it so.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Most kind Bella, thank you so very much.

                    Andy

                  • Tony36

                    Excellent write Andy

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Tony.

                      Andy

                      • Tony36

                        You're welcome Andy

                      • NafisaSB

                        wow - beautiful start to the year - hope it continues far into the future till you reach the pot of gold
                        all the best for 2025 and after

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Most kind Nafisa, thank you.

                          Andy

                          • NafisaSB

                            always welcome - take care, stay safe, healthy and happy



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