Break the Spell That’s Cast.
Travel over the rugged chilly windswept hills.
Walk on passed the scented Heather fields.
Along the well-trodden and beaten down path.
You might finally break the spell that's cast.
Carry on along the cobbled ancient track.
Slowly feeling the weight come off your back.
When you start to feel the fresh snow in the air.
Stay Calm, rest assured you are nearly there.
Carefully climb up the ice-covered mound.
What you're looking for here can be found.
Stand up proud and look out onto the world.
See it all before you as you watch it unfold.
Miles of beauty all there for the eye to see.
Removed from the harshness of humanity.
Oceans of food for thought and tranquillity.
Natures World Peace in complete harmony.
Take it in and recharge those aching bones.
Embrace the moment, when nature is as one.
Treasure the view as it won't be here for long.
Thanks to man, very soon it will all be gone.
Tobani Nov 2024.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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I remember well as a youth climbing the mountains and camping where we would not see another person for weeks. Today hikers and campers are so thick you have to fight them off the trails. Things have changed people are everywhere and with them they bring their problems, eco-devastation, crime, charging for the privilege of parking, standing, looking, noise and just general annoyance. Loved the poem
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The world we live in today is contradicted by the fact that the good parts of nature are disappearing as humans try to produce them.
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It's a powerful spell that's cast, isn't it? So strong that it's been said there are two more rounds to come after this 5th one!
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I'll give you another hint: The Children of the Fifth Sun!
Nice twist at the end.
What did Bob say? Oh, man has invented his doom
Fist step was touching the moon
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What an inspiring poem on the journey toward inner peace and the importance of connecting with nature. Its evocative language and imagery draw the reader into a meditative state. It is powerful to inspire and quite deeply moving.
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Most welcome 🙏🏻
You speak beautifully of the wonderful, healing properties of our incredible natural world. Take a walk and find healing beyond compare. Great write!
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Yup. Ain’t that ending the egregeous truth, my friend. Gorgeous poem, rings as it’s read out loud and its message rings starkly true and urgent. Well done! 🌹👏
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You’re welcome!
Love it
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You're welcome
Great poem and
message I'll beware! 👍
I'll enjoy the view
while it's still there!! 🤩✌️
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️
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This was a beautiful read. Thank you for sharing.🙏🏾
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