Ghost of beauty comes and goes in time's wind that blows
a spirit smoke that flickers then fades in memory's open glades
fleeting sunbeams of the past, broken rays that do not last
new wonder worn by age, now a yawn on life's critic's stage
Naive virgin angel lust falls in wrinkled clouds of dust
ashes of the sun, fall as worm eaten beauty undone
peacock feathers painted bright turn gray in failing light
ravished by age's blight, turn to black in the night
Rough bark does hide another beauty deep inside
Strength of iron tempered in rain an uncut hard wood grain
twisted knots giving perfection hidden charm beyond detection
weathered scars marks of beauty giving shade to others your duty
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Good write SB.
Thanks so much Orchi
I see humanity in this with an outstanding metaphor I see protection pride knowledge and wisdom. That's just what I see, all entwined into some elegant beautiful poetry. 🌹
Thanks so much Teddy your words are always awaited with great anticipation.
This rhyme
Brought to mind
Tolkien.
Beautifully woven words, Soren
Thank you Mutley for the review and encouraging words of support
I see the slow decay and passing of the beauty of life, then to be slowly reborn. Beautifully written piece of work which i really enjoyed reading.
Thank you so much Tobani your feedback is most appreciated.
You are very welcome
This is such a powerful meditation on the duality of beauty and strength. It can point readers to look beyond superficial appearances and appreciate the enduring qualities that define true worth. Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking piece!
Thank you for honing in on the main point of this piece. Your comments are always most appreciated.
Most welcome dear Soren 🙏🏻
Symphonic !
Thank you so much Lorenz your word is most appreciated
The imagery is outstanding, the sentiment of life captured in the moment speaks to me. Embrace the beauty while it is there before you, for it is transient. This is a poem to wrap yourself in.
Dear Bella I thank you so much for this enlightened interpretation of this piece. I is indeed much of what I had in mind. I appreciate your continued suport.
Wow! Wonderful imagery and metaphor on the cycle of life, the passage of time, the endurance of trials (the twisted knots), and yet what stands is a tree providing shelter for others. So beautiful! Liked and faved! 🌹👏
Thank you so much Tristan I appreciate very much for your read and comment it is deeply valued
You are welcome, my dear friend!
Great write
Thank you so much Tony
You're welcome
Terrific poem
my friend!! 👍🌲
Great word choices, rhyme
flow and blend!!
Last two lines rocked it!
Thanks for sharing!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thanks so much Thad I appreciate the read and comment
Beauty is within us soren and needs to be felt.
Andy
Thank you Gold. I appreciate your encouraging words
Words with timeless beauty....
I thank you deeply for your review and words of support. Your words are highly valued
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