The old Barn up on the hill
They say that it's haunted
There have been many stories
The Barn was built in the 1700s
By a cattle rancher
Him and his family had great success
With their set up
But after his wife died
Things started falling apart
The cattle were sold
But fires soon raged
Nothing left but the Barn
They say the rancher's ghost can be seen there
Lurking among the dust and farm equipment
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A poignant reminiscance my friend! Old barns do have their mystery.
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A ghost story set in an old barn on a hill. Tale from the past about a loss that won't let go.
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Good write T. I read of an old barn built about 1400, used as a church, now as a storage shed.
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Always love reading your work!!!
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Love the ghost tale, in a barn on a hill no less. Wonderful! 👏🌹
Thank you Tristan
You're welcome.
In a way the barn standing alone can represent poems and poetry that are the only physical reminder of the poet’s ghost, an imprint of meaning and worded expression.
Thank you, never thought about it That's way
That wasn’t my first thought either, but it was niggling in the back of my mind while reading this. Thanks for kindly receiving these thoughts. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
A touching poem
a poignant story indeed! 😢
Short and succinct and
my pleasure to read!!🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad, best regards
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