sometimes its a chore
other times a relief
I play the strings
making music
a singing from my soul
the music notes
hold space in between
is it the note itself
or the pause
that is more musical?
sometimes I feel
the emotions through me
dont have space in my head
so I put them
in the white space
between the notes.
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Two people playing the same song do not sound the same. Each puts their own soul into it. It is the white spaces that make it yours
what a beautiful comment! I'd quote you on that for sure!
The pause is important that is where you stamp your own mark, nicely written
thank you!
You are very welcome
I guess there is music called emotion in the spaces between the notes. This is my favorite poem.
thank you so much!
Excellent write
thanks Tony!
You're welcome
Led Zeppelin have a song, “Nobody’s Fault But Mine,” which is pausetastic!
hahahaha I love that word, I'm using that now!
Reading Soren’s beautiful comment, I have nothing to offer other than to say, brillianf job NG! 🌹👏
thank you!!
You’re welcome, my friend ❤️🙏
to each his/her own - for some it's the music, and for others the pause - agree with you - it's a personal thing
Artistic souls are undoubtedly intriguing souls.
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