Her lips are like
wet orchids, dressed in
the spring rain,
waiting to be
kissed and
caressed.
- Author: Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 4th, 2025 19:06
- Comment from author about the poem: Check out my book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems on Amazon.com
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Teddy.15
Comments10
Very poetic Thomas
Thanks
BRAVO
Thank you.
You're welcome
Wow! 😲
Wonderful brevity
so romantic i'd say!! 😍
Poetic perfection
in every way!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thanks.
Kiss them lovingly Thomas.
Andy
Thank you.
Good write T. I kissed someone (did I?) lol. It was like kissing an old trout! heehee.
lol
Be Gentle with them, Enjoyed the read
Thanks.
You are very welcome
Simple elegance and vivid comparisons of natural beauty and human emotions lending a timelessness and universality.
Thank you.
Very elegant even though I'm a prude. I appreciate the respect and beauty in your metaphor. 🌹
Thank you, sweet Teddy.
Nicely done, Thomas. A fine write.
Thank you, my friend.
brevity and clarity - good combination - am impressed
Thanks.
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