Some say, there's a dark
within my eyes
like thunder
a dark that sometimes
surrounds all the blue sky
that lays within them
from out of nowhere
black clouds arrive...
and a great storm is born.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Dear Melvin, thank you for inspiring this today. 🌹 Original title was (In the eyes of a poet) 💜
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, aDarkerMind, Tristan Robert Lange, Cassie58, Thomas W Case
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Comments7
In the twinkling of an eye inner turmoil can arise! Majestic 🙏🏻👍🕊️
Beautifully put dear Arqios 🌹
Thanks 🙏🏻 🕊
And so a poem is born out of a storm. It is these storms that I love to watch with all their turbulence, wind and lightning, It is then that the raindrops of inspiration put us to sleep in a dreamland of expression. Lovely Teddy
You see, I read Melvin's poem and this one is born, you just wrote one too in your review. Wow how wonderful poetry can be. Thank you my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
and with each storm comes another world to see.
Absolutely and thank you so much for the inspiration. 🌹
The eyes are the mirrors of the soul. It would be impossible to hide a storm brewing. Moods can change so very quickly. Wonderful dear Teddy that you have been inspired by another poet’s words to pen this fine poem. Magnifique. 🌹
Today I had no intention of writing but yes lightning struck, and out came my scribbles 🤣 thank you dear Cassie, always a pleasure to see you. 🌹
I wish I could get some inspiration Teddy. My muse is the meanest of the mean. She likes her holidays and her vino. I rank low on her priorities 😂 I hope you have had a lovely day, 🌹
LOL I find I can take it or leave it when I write but it's taken many years, I always know when I'm over thinking it, best to just let it come, go read some of Melvin's see what comes out. 🌹
am deeply touched by your comment Teddy;
Thank You.
Dearest Melvin, thank you my friend, I'm just going to play with the title, as this I wrote right after reading yours. Thank you dear friend. Thank you. 🌹
That storm is only clearing your way for brighter future Teddy.
Andy
Thank you my dear Andy, it surely is and when the storms reappear I now have all the tools needed to lesson the damage. 🌹
Powerful work. The eyes are the window to the soul.
Thank you dearest Thomas I believe so. 🌹
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