When looking at the arms
Of the galaxy
They don't appear to be
Squeezing the life
Out of me
Or anyone else, held
In a spirillic embrace
Alcyone has a bright face
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Wonder what the sky would look like from the heart. A fun read that gives perspective to our position and a metaphor as well.
Do you mean from the heart of the galaxy?
Of course that is the heart of it all. But from our heart is a good question too.
That sure is! What would we see if we saw with a clear heart?! I don't know. Yet!
Makes me wonder how our solar system at the wispy ends of the galaxy doesn’t fling off into outer space! A very delightful poem you’ve shared with us here 🌌🪐🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
Held in the embrace of Alcyone, which is then held in the embrace of Sirius!
Yes, your poem does demonstrate this embrace. 👍🕊️
Excellent write
Thanks for dropping by, Tony.
You're welcome
A nice write. Really enjoyed.
That's good to hear! Thanks for dropping by, Tom.
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