paranoid

NinjaGirl

Paranoid

In a void

Caught in myself

Leave time on the shelf

Won’t stop the thinking

Of course, it’s just an inkling

But I’m pretty sure

They’re after me.

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  • Cheeky Missy

    Welcome to reality.

    • NinjaGirl

      that's a rude awakening!

    • rin

      In my case, when I can't stop thinking, I listen to pop music to clear my head and think of poetry. If you think about it too much, the poem will become complicated.

      • NinjaGirl

        fair enough! thanks for the advice haha

      • sorenbarrett

        Which is better to think that no one is after you when they are or think they are not? And we know they are. A pertinant poem about how things are for many now days. Very nicely put and written

        • NinjaGirl

          to your question, I suppose neither...either way is dangerous!

        • TobaniNataiella

          i can connect with this poem when your mind is in overdrive, you think the world is out to get you but you have no idea Why, How or even what for. Nicely worded.

          • NinjaGirl

            yes that's exactly it! thanks for reading!

            • TobaniNataiella

              You are very welcome

            • LP2187

              Love this poem I feel this all the time.

            • Tony36

              Great write

              • NinjaGirl

                thank you!

                • Tony36

                  You're welcome

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  I know they're all after me! Jokes aside, I get this and have felt this way. And no, the thinking never stops, does it? It spins on rotation. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏

                  • NinjaGirl

                    it sure doesn't, quite the "fun" ride!

                  • Thomas W Case

                    Excellent work.

                    • NinjaGirl

                      thank you!

                    • Dan Williams

                      Paranoid means all too often they really are out to get you. Hang on.

                      • NinjaGirl

                        thanks for reading!

                      • Mutley Ravishes

                        You're turning into a rapper.

                        • NinjaGirl

                          hahaha thank you! I would not be surprised if that somehow became a hobby...

                        • NafisaSB

                          sometimes one does get this feeling, and it's scary - so hope yours passes quickly away
                          have a good day

                          • NinjaGirl

                            thank you!

                          • ele

                            i love this so much, especially those last two verses

                            • NinjaGirl

                              thank you!



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