I don’t go out at night

Demar Desu

at home just inside 

honestly a simple man 

just this warmth will do 

  • Author: Demar Desu (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 8th, 2025 00:10
  • Category: Haiku
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  • Michael Edwards

    Super little 575 shorty.

  • sorenbarrett

    Another wonderful senryu that deserves much contemplation. Nicely worded

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Love this Senryu my friend! Well done on this! There's a lot of different thoughts that come to mind with this poem and multiple ways it can be interpreted as I see it. The beauty of simplicity and the beauty of the Senryu come through in profoundly deep ways. Well done, bro! ❤️

    • Demar Desu

      Always appreciate your responses. Thank you TRL

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        You're welcome, Demar!

      • Tony36

        BRAVO

        • Demar Desu

          *bows*

          • Tony36

            You're welcome

          • Brian Otucho

            Only three but strong lines

            • Demar Desu

              Thank you Brian

            • vicecream

              Love this one

              • Demar Desu

                I love you snowflake



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