Which Did You Choose

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Which Did You Choose.

 

If Man Only.

Had One Eye.

Would He

See.

Evil or Good.

 

If Man Only.

Had One Ear.

Would He.

Hear.

Evil or Good.

 

You Only Have.

One Heart.

Which One Did.

You.

Choose.

 

Tobani. Jan (2025)

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    With two eyes is see both evil and good, with two ears I hear both evil and good with one heart I may choose only one and it is all or nothing a great message you send and a great illustration you make.

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    • arqios

      Bam πŸ’₯ that was a one -two combo, so nice to be set up in such poetic manner!

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        • arqios

          You’re welcome πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ‘πŸ»

        • Tony36

          Great write

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            • Tony36

              You're welcome

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Bravo! Profound, pognant, and this will ALWAYS be timely. Well done! πŸŒΉπŸŒΉπŸ‘πŸ‘ You get the double rose and clap on this, dear Tobani!

            • Brian Otucho

              Marvelous, you can't choose both at once but only one

            • Thad Wilk

              With one eye πŸ‘οΈ good I would see! πŸ‘
              One ear πŸ‘‚ I would hear only good.
              One heart, stil i'd choose the same. πŸ€”
              Awesome poem, mind blowing
              my friend!🀩
              Thanks for sharing! πŸ‘
              Best regards ✌️ Thad

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              • Cheeky Missy

                I must, perforce, behold and hear the evil, yet prefer to see beyond to the beauty barely in sight and less readily heard. Fascinating and sweetly rendered in charming brevity with a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing!

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