forget me not

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

a pretty flower cries

too delicate to die

 

dont forget me I pray

earnestly I might say

 

I'm not quite ready

and sure it's petty

 

I hope I burn you alive

the thought of me drives

 

you insane I hope

you won't be able to cope]

 

the blue flower in your mind

relief you never will find.

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 8th, 2025 21:36
  • Comment from author about the poem: the flower cries, "forget me not," but not of loneliness or desperation, instead of wrath.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 54
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Kez, Tristan Robert Lange
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  • Cheeky Missy

    How beautifully rendered and with a haunting poignancy and imagery so delicate, I almost catch my breath. Once again I wish to know what that particular flower looks like, as I'm more acquainted with the violets, of which I am, were I a flower. Thank you so very much for sharing! Love you.

    • NinjaGirl

      thank you so much! you can just search them up to see a picture, Forget Me Nots might me one of my favorite flowers

      • Cheeky Missy

        I did, wondering whether my family's last residence had them. Thank you again!

      • Kez

        Amazing Ninja girl, I love your work 🙂

        • NinjaGirl

          thank you so much!

        • Poetic Licence

          A flower that is toughening up and about to seek revenge, A haunting piece

          • NinjaGirl

            thank you for reading!

            • Poetic Licence

              You are very welcome

            • sorenbarrett

              This poem dives deeper into the psychi of memory, The desire to be remembered for all that is good and the desire to forget all that is bad. Even the desire to be remembered for pain and sacrifice as opposed to be forgotten for not suffering, The idea of mayrterdom begins to enter and its eternal cementing in the memory of man. This poem bleeds perfume of the violet crushed on the heel. A very philosophical write

              • NinjaGirl

                thank you!

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Love this piece. It's about time for the flower to pluck back! I love the vibe this poem has...the taking back of what has been taken. Hauntingly beautiful and poignant, my dear friend! 🌹👏 An easy fave for me!



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