With your fire reshape me
Mold me into that which I need to be
Prepare me for the road ahead
With your fire
Burn away all the things holding me back
Light the fire within me
To reach my purest and best
With your fire reshape me
Mold me into that which I need to be
Prepare me for the road ahead
With your fire
Burn away all the things holding me back
Light the fire within me
To reach my purest and best
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I hear desire in this poem a striving for betterment and a refining of ones good qualities. Nicely said
Thank you
Forged in the refining fire. Indeed. A wonderful write Tony! Well done! 🌹👏
Thank you Tristan
You’re welcome!
Burn away obstacles and ignite your potential. A nice poem about self improvement!
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A very poignant write , enjoyed the read
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You are very welcome
Like a prayer and a statement of being and becoming. Pure enjoyment! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
Thank you
You are welcome Tony 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
Fantastic.
Thank you
May that fire within you Tony take you to that place of wonder that is waiting for you.
Andy
Thank you Andy
Nicely done, Tony. A fine write.
Thank you Tom
Awesome poem
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You're welcome
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