Forges of Life

Tony36

 With your fire reshape me

Mold me into that which I need to be

Prepare me for the road ahead

 

With your fire

Burn away all the things holding me back

Light the fire within me

To reach my purest and best

  • Author: Tony36 (Online Online)
  • Published: January 9th, 2025 08:37
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 33
  • Users favorite of this poem: LP2187
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Comments8

  • sorenbarrett

    I hear desire in this poem a striving for betterment and a refining of ones good qualities. Nicely said

    • Tony36

      Thank you

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Forged in the refining fire. Indeed. A wonderful write Tony! Well done! 🌹👏

    • LP2187

      Burn away obstacles and ignite your potential. A nice poem about self improvement!

      • Tony36

        Thank you

      • TobaniNataiella

        A very poignant write , enjoyed the read

      • arqios

        Like a prayer and a statement of being and becoming. Pure enjoyment! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻

        • Tony36

          Thank you

          • arqios

            You are welcome Tony 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻

          • Thomas W Case

            Fantastic.

            • Tony36

              Thank you

            • Goldfinch60

              May that fire within you Tony take you to that place of wonder that is waiting for you.

              Andy

              • Tony36

                Thank you Andy

              • Tom Dylan

                Nicely done, Tony. A fine write.

                • Tony36

                  Thank you Tom



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