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Author:
Rocky Lagou (
Offline) - Published: January 9th, 2025 22:05
- Comment from author about the poem: Ever feel like someone you love is headed towards a disaster and there isn't much in your power you can do to save them?
- Category: Friendship
- Views: 15
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Love the style… and yeah but sometimes gotta let ‘em experience it
Very true, thx for commenting
Good write R. Aww, why they say to me (do they? lol): 'You're an accident waiting to happen'.
thx
A good metaphor and the formate of the poem aided in the presentation of an oncoming train. Nicely done
Thx sm, I'm glad you enjoyed the format as well, it was formatted intentionally
Yes, it’s sad to be unable to do anything, like shattering glass all in slow motion! Hey Rocky! Happy New Year! It’s been so long… 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
Hi there! Glass shattering in slow motion is an apt comparison. I'm glad you liked the poem. Hoping this new year brings you much joy and peace
Peace Rocky. Hope to see more of you onsite, schedules permitting 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊️
Liked it. And I agree, the futility of trying to help some people is very disheartening.
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