on the mirror
on the wall
stainless steel
forever scrawl
always there
on my skin
heaven beware
this dirty sin
I did not deserve
- Author: NinjaGirl ( Offline)
- Published: January 10th, 2025 19:50
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 38
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Comments3
A great run of rhyme that leave a bit of doubt regarding whether abuse, or a tattoo. Maybe an abusive tattoo. Although short it gives a powerful message.
thank you
Some things can't be erased. A good poem.
Thank you, I know you know this all too well
Abuse sucks! A real example of the sin and evil out in the world. This poem, my dear friend, flows like a chantβ¦a wonderfully flowing rhyme that delivers the truth with a punch. Well done! ππ
thank you, it's a tragically true tale that I wish didn't have to exist!
Yes. I got that impression from reading it. I am so sorry, my friend. I wish it didn't have to exist too. ππ₯
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