The view from
between your legs,
with my glistening
face in the soft
lamplight is
more than
sublime.
The trust
is thick,
and
sweet.
Your happy
moans are like a
symphony from
Mozart as I wait
for the
grand finish.
dun dun dun dun dun dun dun
dun dun dun dun dun
Dun Dun
DUN
You pull me inward,
and I smell
Paradise.
Sticky faced
ambrosia.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
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Comments6
Sexual, sensual, errotic it is all of these Thomas
Thank you.
A custard affair lol 🤣 gracious as always on this subject you put the lady on a pedestal and that's why I love your work. 🌹
Thank you, sweet Teddy.
Truly delightful, from every aspect. Wow!
Thank you, Bella.
Might to early for some to read this !!, enjoyed the read
Thank you, my friend.
You are very welcome
I guess you know how to tastefully describe the ecstasies of the bedroom in pretty detail from the man's point of view. My la! Excellently rendered with fitting imagery and a steamy poignancy. Thank you.
Thank you.
A fine write with some great lines. Like a symphony from Mozart. Just fantastic.
Thank you, kind sir.
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