Notice of absence from LP2187
will be gone for a week
will be gone for a week
Time falls to the floor
Scars of life, a fierce whisper
Healing's far away
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- Category: Haiku
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Some scars remain. Not all wounds heal, even though time is running out and forgiveness is a healer. For peace of mind, it is best to find forgiveness. Never too late to start. Enjoyed your haiku LP2187. All the best.
Thank you very much Cassie.
You are very welcome .
Good Haiku LP.
Thank you Orchi
Few words, correct statement, some wounds do not heal, Enjoyed the read.
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Makes one ponder the stuff of life. A very moving read. šš»šš»š
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Wow. Tremendous work.
Thank you
BRAVO
Thank you!
You're welcome
Senryu. What's tripping me up is the suggestion that Time could ever be other than weighty and thieving. Fascinating and rendered to effect with an excellently haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you very much!
well, full health is far away, but a little step of healing is right around the corner
Yeah but the healing journey is very long. At least Iām on my way!
yep!
What a good message. So short but has a lot to tell. Thank you for sharing. Have a good day and stay healthy
Thank you very much!
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