Scars of life

LP2187

Time falls to the floor

Scars of life, a fierce whisper

Healing's far away

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  • Cassie58

    Some scars remain. Not all wounds heal, even though time is running out and forgiveness is a healer. For peace of mind, it is best to find forgiveness. Never too late to start. Enjoyed your haiku LP2187. All the best.

    • LP2187

      Thank you very much Cassie.

      • Cassie58

        You are very welcome .

      • orchidee

        Good Haiku LP.

        • LP2187

          Thank you Orchi

        • TobaniNataiella

          Few words, correct statement, some wounds do not heal, Enjoyed the read.

          • LP2187

            Thank you very much

            • TobaniNataiella

              You are very welcome

            • arqios

              Makes one ponder the stuff of life. A very moving read. šŸ‘šŸ»šŸ™šŸ»šŸ•Š

              • LP2187

                Thank you very much

              • Thomas W Case

                Wow. Tremendous work.

                • LP2187

                  Thank you

                • Tony36

                  BRAVO

                  • LP2187

                    Thank you!

                    • Tony36

                      You're welcome

                    • Cheeky Missy

                      Senryu. What's tripping me up is the suggestion that Time could ever be other than weighty and thieving. Fascinating and rendered to effect with an excellently haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

                      • LP2187

                        Thank you very much!

                      • NinjaGirl

                        well, full health is far away, but a little step of healing is right around the corner

                        • LP2187

                          Yeah but the healing journey is very long. At least Iā€™m on my way!

                          • NinjaGirl

                            yep!



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