She was an Angel full of grace
She fell from Heaven in much disgrace
Her dove white wings now black as coal
To match the darkness of her soul
Banished from Heaven, she has no shame
Banished from Heaven, only herself To blame
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Tony36 (
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Makes one wonder what an angel could do that would result in that sever a sentence. Must have been something real bad or a lot of fun. This poem in its simplicity is very well written.
Thank you
I am wondering what this angel did to end up banished. I agree with Soren it was either something really bad or something really fun! LOL! Either way, enjoyed this a lot, Tony! 🌹👏
Thank you Tristan
You're welcome, my friend!
A naughty angel, now that is a first !!, enjoyed the read
Thank you
You are very welcome
Why a ''she'' angel ?
Thank you, as for your question, why not
Powerful penning,
captivating and
thought provoking!! 😇
Great read my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you Thad, best regards
Good words Tony, maybe one day the blackness wiil come off and white will become her goodness once again.
A ndy
Thank you Andy
Nicely done, Tony. Love the way it rhymed.
Thank you Tom
Leaves me curious as to the category of sin bring such reprisals. Nice work here.
Thank you Dan
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