winter sun crested
dog wakes up prematurely
time to take a poop.
© 2025 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
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Author:
Tristan Robert Lange (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It happens.
- Category: Haiku
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- Users favorite of this poem: Demar Desu, Cheeky Missy, Cassie58
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Good write T. Oops!
🤣 Thank you Orchi! 🙏❤️
Excellent write Tristan
Thank you Tony! Much appreciated! 🙏❤️
You're welcome
When you got to go you got to go. A fun piece my friend
Indeed! When nature calls, and that morning it called pretty early! 🤣 Thank you so much, Soren! Much appreciated! ❤️🙏
Natures call , enjoyed the read
Yup. Sometimes it is as simple as that! Ooh what a relief doggie said. 🤣 Thank you, Tobani! Much appreciated, my friend!
Lol. Great work.
🤣Thanks Thomas. Glad you enjoyed! 🙏❤️
Oh, but what a charming image with the pretty little senryu! The pictures coincide beautifully. Lovely! Rendered to effect with fitting imagery and a teasing poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
Thank you for your time, feedback and fave, my friend! Much appreciated! Glad the poem delivered! 🙏❤️
Haahaahaaaaa! 🤣
Hilarious haiku!!!
I spilt my beer 🍺
reading it thank you!! 😁
Thanks fur the
laughs and chuckles!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
🤣 You are welcome, my dear friend. Glad the poem delivered though, I nust confess that I sure am sorry it led to such egregious alcohol abuse. Next time, I’ll put a clear warning at the top: “Caution, may cause your beer to spill”. 😂 Thank you, Thad, for the very kind words and review! Much appreciated! 🙏❤️
Funny. The timing wasn’t very convenient though. Lovely sunrise, I wonder if doggie noticed Tristen lol.
LOL! Probably not! Yeah, the timing wasn't too great. But I wrote the haiku in my mind while she...ehem...relieved herself! 🤣 Thank you, Cassie. Glad the poem delivered! 🙏❤️
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