Blue Star

Mutley Ravishes

I'm feeling blue

Nearly all

Of the dew

Has gone under the radar

In the city of stars

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  • sorenbarrett

    Now this was a short one that sent its message in just a few words. It can be taken in several ways but I like thinking of it as the milky way as the city of stars, Then again it could be Hollywood

  • Tony36

    Great write

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Thanks for dropping by, Tony.

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • Cheeky Missy

        Hmm. Yet another tribute to the latest hot propaganda, is it? We congratulates thee on thy success. Excellently rendered with appropriate imagery and a delicate poignancy. Thank you for sharing!

        • Mutley Ravishes

          The Simpson's were one hell of a family, weren't they?!

          • Cheeky Missy

            Nevir did see even one episode of them but I'm half certain this show on YouTube stems from that in portrayal of modern dismemberment and other heinous acts.

          • Cassie58

            A little brevity which leaves many different images and scenarios in my mind. Well penned MR.

          • arqios

            So good to experience introspection speckled with a dusting of melancholy in a star-blanketed city. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻

            • Mutley Ravishes

              Homer and Bart
              Weren't having laugh
              This time round.

              Thanks for dropping by.

              • arqios

                Oh, now that switches things around a bit! Thanks for the heads up 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻

                • Mutley Ravishes

                  You're welcome! The times we live in....

                  • arqios

                    Indeed!

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    Wow! This says so much in its brevity, Mutley. I see some references in your comments to the Simpsons. While I am familiar with the show I am missing the connection. Still, I find this poem relatable, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏

                    • Mutley Ravishes

                      Try searching for "Simpsons, blue umbrella."
                      Thanks for dropping by!

                      • Tristan Robert Lange

                        Will do. 😊 You're welcome!

                      • Tom Dylan

                        Nice one, Mutley. This one flows so well.

                        • Mutley Ravishes

                          Thank, Tom. Lets hope the water starts flowing as well!

                        • Thomas W Case

                          Powerful in its brevity.

                        • Thad Wilk

                          Short and succinct and
                          poignant too! 😢
                          A crying shame they
                          lost all their dew! 🙏
                          A great read indeed! 👍
                          Best regards ✌️ Thad

                          • Mutley Ravishes

                            Thanks for dropping by, Thad.
                            It's a crying shame the dew is going unnoticed!
                            Have a great week.



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