Time has run through
golden fields of hay
and swam the moss-covered
ponds in the soft amber
light of dawn.
There are shards of
beauty in the
rubble of a broken life.
Those summer days
crawled
like
a
grumpy
tortoise.
Then galloped on by, like
a bareback colt.
I fed on the breast of life,
grew strong, and free.
And now,
those November birds
are
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
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Comments13
So very beautifully written dear Thomas from the darkness of hell, we rise to see and to appreciate every last bit of glorious beauty there is to see. πΉ
So very true, sweet Teddy.
Great write
Thank you.
You're welcome
Ooh! I dearly love how skillfully you use metaphors herein, illustrating so much capably! Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a ghastly, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
Thank you so much.
Wonderful poem Thomas. Love the way you use animals to convey the passage of time. Brilliant! πΉπ
Thank you.
Time such a relative thing. A powerful write that leads to reflection
Thanks.
Good write T.
Thank you.
Great write TWC! ππ»ππ»π
Thanks.
Welcome ππ»π
Like it. I love Summer and long for its return.
Walks in the Countryside and see βHazy Sunshineβ on the Fields and hear Birdsong.
Thank you.
Powerful in both expression and imagery. Great write.
Thanks, I appreciate it.
A powerful poem indeed ..
Thank you, my friend.
Wonderful write of reflection. Powerfully delivered Thomas.
Thank you.
beautiful and well written
thanks for sharing
Thank you.
always welcome, Sir
Beautiful, magnificent and what not! I loved your poem. I enjoyed great journey reading and listening to your poems.
Hope to read more and become friends with you!
Yes, for sure. Thanks.
Yo are most welcome π. Thank you for reading my poems and commenting so nice a message to me!!
Enjoy your weekends!
With regards,
Simurgh
A poetic bard from India
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