Fields of grass beside a rocky ravine
Gentle hills and soil so pure
A place of nature so serene
Adventure calls with an irresistible lure
Gentle hills and soil so pure
A glow in the dark of the turbulent chasm
Adventure with an irresistible lure
The underground world is but a phantasm
A glow in the dark of the turbulent chasm
Chasing light are the cryptids below
The underground world is but a phantasm
Forged from horror a few ages ago
Chasing light are the cryptids below
A place of nature so serene
Forged from horror a few ages ago
Fields of grass beside a rocky ravine
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Comments8
love this good imagery and
word use is amazing . nice flow
well written and expressed
you are very talented dont stop writing
brilliant poem great read jim xx
Thank you very much for your kind words, I appreciate your feedback Jim.
your welcome and worth it keep it up xx
Good write LP.
Thank you Orchi
I really do love your poems and their imagery, my friend. Well done on this! The repetition...just brilliantly executed! 🌹👏 Easy fave!
Aw thank you so much!
You're welcome!
Very beautiful, your words are a sword for sure
Thank you very much!
There is so much beauty in here, yet I can feel that there is also a massive haunting, chasing light, keep going you will eventually find it, I promise because I did. 🌹
Thank you very much. I found it too!
Wow. Intriguing and irresistibly enchanting, how excellently rendered! Fascinating imagery with a haunting and enticing poignancy give this beauty such charm, I love it. Thank you so very much for sharing.
Thank you so much!
My pleasure, you're welcome!
Bursting with vibrant images! A true delight 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
Thank you!
You’re welcome🙏🏻 have an wonderful week 🕊️
Edgy and articulate. "Adventure calls with an irresistible lure" surely defines this. Nice work.
Thank you.
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