Kunda’s buffered
Toast without butter
Is too dry
I can almost hear
The svadhisthana sigh
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Mutley Ravishes (
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Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read
Haha! The last line is really hard to say fast!
This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or surface-level things are inadequate when deeper or spiritual needs are not met. That feeling of buffering...we all know it in terms of our tech...but it's a spiritual thing too! Love this poem. Very deep! š¹š
Thanks for your comments. Itās always interesting to hear othersā takes on what I wrote.
Yes, I was aiming at what you said. And something much darker! (Theākundabufferā or āTail of Satanā as itās been called).
Ooh. Interesting. Youāre welcome, my friend! š
Wow. Now this can apply to feelings and situations as well as a kitchen bench battlefield in the forming.
"A kitchen bench battle in the forming." LOL!
I'm glad the rhyme broke through the surface.
Rhymes are fun! š¤©
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