The Visitor

Tony36

A man is greeted one day

By a figure who'd come a long way

Black hooded robe and bony hands

Holding a staff

A skull for his head

 

The reaper of souls is what they call me

I have come to collect thee

 

The man whose name was Jeff

Said ok, but hang on a sec

Pulling out his phone he began to talk

The reaper just stood there and watched

 

1 minute turned to two

Soon 30 had gone by

 

Jeff hang up and then said

Sorry I can't go my wife passed away, maybe come back another day

 

The reaper answered

I know took her myself she's waiting for you in the great beyond

  • Author: Tony36 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 20th, 2025 07:31
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  • arqios

    Very interesting exchange there! Wouldn’t know what I’d do in such a situation πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

    • Tony36

      Thank you

      • arqios

        You’re welcome Tony πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

      • sorenbarrett

        A fun read with the last line I thought that Jeff would say he had a restraining order keeping him away from her or that he would be in too much trouble from her if he went where she was. Good write Tony

        • Tony36

          Thank you

        • orchidee

          Good write T.

          • Tony36

            Thank you

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Wow! Interesting scenario! Can't cheat death! Well done, Tony!

          • Cassie58

            A fun read with a twist at the end. I guess the Reaper was pushed for time:) All the best Tony.

            • Tony36

              Thank you

            • Thad Wilk

              Great poem and
              Reaper story indeed! 😳 πŸ’€
              A really thoughtful dude
              was he, after all!πŸ‘
              Brought a smile to my face,
              a pleΓ‘ure to read!!
              Best regards ✌️ Thad

              • Tony36

                Thank you Thad, best regards

              • David Wakeling

                An amazing meeting with the grim reaper.I enjoyed reading well done

                • Tony36

                  Thank you David

                • Goldfinch60

                  Very good words Tony, those who have passed are all waiting for us.

                  Andy

                  • Tony36

                    Thank you Andy



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