Destruction

LP2187


Notice of absence from LP2187
will be gone for a week

Why am I so cursed

I always bring destruction 

Wherever I go

  • Author: LP2187 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 22nd, 2025 03:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: I hope no one relates
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange
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  • arqios

    It can feel like that sometimes. Last week has bled into this one and 5he flow hasn’t stemmed yet. Totally relate to this 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊

    • LP2187

      Thank you! I tend to feel like this a bit too often, I guess that’s why I wrote this.

    • Poetic Licence

      I think this can relate to a lot people at some stage, hopefully not you at this point. Enjoyed the read (poetically)

      • LP2187

        Thank you, maybe we all feel this at some points but hopefully not all the time. I appreciate your thoughts.

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Unfortunately, I do relate. Destruction might be a strong word currently...but at points in my life, I have even felt that. A senryu that, sadly, will find a number of people relating. But that is not sad, actually. It is only sad that people experience those emotions, but beautiful your words are able to make them feel less alone. Well done on this, my friend! 🌹👏

          • LP2187

            Perhaps destruction was exaggerating but sometimes I guess it feels like that. Thank you very much for your kind words!

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              As you know, in poetry, we go with the word that best conveys the emotion. Destruction, imho, was the perfect word. It surely does feel that way, no doubt. Again, well done my friend. You are most welcome. 🙏❤️

            • NinjaGirl

              because our beauty faults us, and nobody can see the truth

              • LP2187

                indeed

              • Thomas W Case

                I've been there. Powerful work.

                • LP2187

                  Thank you very much

                • Cassie58

                  Not a good place to be. Such a negative way to think about yourself, so sad. Excellent brevity LP2187.

                  • LP2187

                    Thank you very much Cassie

                  • Cheeky Missy

                    Welcome to the club. I've bemoaned repeatedly to little or no avail my utter lack of the Midas' touch but rather a horribly haunting destructive touch. You've excellently rendered the reality with perfect imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy in tasteful brevity. Thank you for sharing.

                  • LP2187

                    Thank you very much for your thoughtful comment, means a lot to me. No matter how hard you try you can still reach disappointment, unfortunately.



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