Notice of absence from Hopeless/the problem
I am out in the gazing up at the sky, as every little moment passes by
Imma be back but not in time
Im hurt and what could be worse
I am out in the gazing up at the sky, as every little moment passes by
Imma be back but not in time
Im hurt and what could be worse
When the light doesnt shine
And the birds dont sing
The water turns gray
And the night never turns into day
You sit back and think
Of all the places you could be
But then realize that
No one likes you
No one wants you
Your just another experiment
No one needs you
No one loves you
Even in the darkest moments
You are just a game
Theres a beginning
But an ending
Your here for the ending so that person knows
Knows they made it work
But then if you live they failed
And you work and work and work just to fail
Because no one cares about you they dont care
They dont care about your accomplishments
They only look at failures
No one
No...
one
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Author:
Lil-M-M (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I am just going thru smt at thing point
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
A haunting piece on some one struggling a bit with how they are feeling inside and about themselves. Only having failures acknowledge and not their achievements or them as a person, hope it gets better
Yea me too, but thank you sooo much!!!!!!!
You are very welcome
I don't see your failures...I see your resilience
awwwwwwwwwwwww thank you!!!
of course!
Life can be such a struggle at times, especially when you are young. Hang in there. It’s worth it Lil. All good wishes.
Thank you Cassie
Awesome
Thanks!!
No problem
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