I

Garth Rakumakoe

I

am humble mahogany

-

I am a craft

borne of hearts of old

whose devotion was duty

and love a sacrifice

scarred, unquestionable

soft and centered

strong and dependable

as polished oak

Time itself

had to wait for me

I

am an old soul

 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Great metaphors in this poem the analogies are solid and most applicable. Carefully chosen wording helps with the power of this poem, Old soul indeed.

  • Mutley Ravishes

    "Living in a new world, with an old soul," as Anthony sang it.
    I remember finishing reading Lord of the Rings when I was 15. I didn't want to live in this world anymore. It is a lonely era.
    Powerful write!

  • sorenbarrett

    Like old furniture old souls are not always valued or recognized for their worth. A beautiful write that holds a bit of sadness

    • Garth Rakumakoe

      Couldn't have said it any better. 🙏🏼

    • Rocky Lagou

      I’ve always felt like an old soul myself, in the sense that I feel like a 70 yr old in the body of a 19 yr old, lol. The way you use the term as a reflection of your roots though, as you so beautifully articulate in this poem, is beyond beautiful. “Time itself had to wait for me” is such a powerful line. I think this poem has given voice to the many who came before you who didn’t have the platform nor opportunity to do so. 🤍

      • Garth Rakumakoe

        I cannot thank you enough brother, for identifying. ❤🙏🏼



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